Talk:Berek Joselewicz

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[edit] Since biblical times

Joselewicz commanded the first Jewish military formation since Biblical times.[1]

Please rephrase, while possibly so, there is no way to know for sure. Yes, it's referenced, but use common sense! How do you know for sure, for example, that Jews that together with muslims were trying to defend Jerusalem from the Crusaders didn't have their own formation. The jewish unit here is notable but the phrasing is too strong.

Also, it is not clear whether 20 people survived the Praga assault from his unit only or from all the defenders. Needs rephrasing as well. --Irpen 22:23, 5 April 2006 (UTC) Yes, it's referenced, but use common sense! Irpen in view of your constant use of Imperial Russia propaganda books about Poland I am happy about your statement. Does it mean you will stop using them ? --Molobo 07:41, 6 April 2006 (UTC)

I agree that the statement is incorrect. ←Humus sapiens ну? 23:31, 5 April 2006 (UTC)

It is referenced here also[2] --Molobo 06:45, 6 April 2006 (UTC)