User talk:Bellwether BC/Sandbox/Someone Dies, Someone Lives

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Hello and welcome to Wikipedia. My name is Risker, and your teacher knows me. Please check with him so that you know that it is okay to "talk" with me here. I will stop by every once in a while to help you with this page, if that is okay with you.

Tonight, I "copy edited" your article a bit, mostly for spelling and punctuation. Don't worry that you made some mistakes; I got to be a good speller by reading a lot of books, and you are doing the right thing by reading and writing. You can see the before-and-after versions of your story by clicking on this blue spot here. (The blue spot is called a link, and the screen you see is called a "diff", which means it shows you the difference between the two versions.) I used to find it helpful to write down words I misspelled so that I would remember better the next time; you might want to try that, and see if it works for you.

Good luck to you, and have fun editing Wikipedia. I am not on Wikipedia all the time, but if you have a question you think I can answer, you can leave me a message on my "talk" page. --Risker (talk) 02:42, 8 January 2008 (UTC)