User talk:BacchusAcolyte
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You placed the following information on Bill Ayers article "Barak Obama, a Democratic freshman senator from Illinois, has been criticized for his close relation with Ayers during the 2008 presidential race. [1] Obama has been identified as attending at least one function at the former terrorist’s house in Chicago and Obama had sat on a committee for the Woods Fund of Chicago with Ayers. While trying to distance himself in the April 17th ABC Democratic primary debate, Obama did not apologize for affiliating with Ayers.[2]" This appears more appropriate for Barack Obama wiki article which appears here [1].
Mentioning Obama connection to Ayers is currently under discussion on the talk page, you comments about this topics should be added there.
You appear to me a new user, so I am just giving you a friendly heads up on the this topic. I am going to remove you recent change and encourage you to join the conversation on the talk page. You can chat with me on my talk page page for questions. It is me i think (talk) 15:03, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Welcome!
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Do want to again welcome you to wikipedia, and apologizing for having to delete your first edits. There has just been ongoing discussion about the topic. I would encourage you to look at other articles and learn more about wikipedia.It is me i think (talk) 15:13, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Please be mindful of how you phrase information in an article.
In the article about Bill Ayers you said " Barak Obama, a democratic freshman senator from Illinois, has been criticized for his close relation with Ayers during the 2008 presidential race. [3]Obama has been identified as attending at least one function at the former terrorist’s house in Chicago and Obama had sat on a committee for the Woods Fund of Chicago with Ayers. While trying to distance himself in the April 17th ABC Democratic primary debate, Obama did not apologize for affiliating with Ayers.[4]"
PLEASE BE ADVISE THIS IS UNDER DISCUSSION, consult the article talk page. A better way to phrase this is " Ayers, and his connection to Barak Obama, a democratic freshman senator from Illinois, has been criticized during the 2008 presidential race. [5]Ayers connection to Obama, includes, Obama attending at least one function at the former terrorist’s house in Chicago and they had sat on a committee for the Woods Fund of Chicago with Ayers. Obama relationship with Ayers has been describe, though an Obama campaign as friendly, and during an ABC sponsored Democratic primary debate on April 17, 2008, Obama did not apologize for affiliating with Ayers.[6]" —Preceding unsigned comment added by It is me i think (talk • contribs) 15:31, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- With your detailed comment about Obama and references, it appears more appropriate for his wiki article, go here Barack Hussein Obama, Jr. It is me i think (talk) 15:38, 17 April 2008 (UTC)