Talk:Aventine Hill

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A very informative article and I just have a few suggestions. First, I would edit the link in the etymology section to only cover the word "Aventinus." You also might want to include the dates of Ancus Marcius's rule. I would also replace the phrase "fascism" with the "fascist period" or "under fascist rule" or something like that. Finally, a couple of the sources require NU passwords to access the articles, which might be problematic for those wanting to access your sources.24.12.189.96 23:06, 14 May 2007 (UTC)Dan Frydman

Generally good article, just a few suggestions. You may want to expand and clarity the original definition, it's somewhat cryptic. Also, the large paragraph in the Mythology section is a bit confusing. You might want to rework the language for greater clarity. --21:32, 15 May 2007 (UTC)Roswell Mueller

I think the Etymology section, very interesting theories for how the hill was named. For the Aventinus terms I would suggest linking just a few words rather than a short phrase. The Mythology section got kind of confusing with with all the different hills. I recommend going over this again. The ancient and medieval section could use a little smoothing out. Jing Yuan Liu 05:15, 16 May 2007 (UTC) Jing Yuan Liu