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I made some minor changes to references; I also deleted a sentence that mentioned the albedo of Venus is 0.76, since one sentence later it stated that Venus reflected 90% of the incident sunlight. The alternative to deleting this sentence would have been a long discussion of the different types of albedo (which varies with wavelength), which would have been rather off topic; people actuallly interested in albedo can look at the albedo entry.

Geoffrey.landis 15:13, 12 September 2006 (UTC)Geoff Landis


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[edit] hydrogen can easily be extracted

"Hydrogen is primarily present as sulfuric acid (H2SO4), and hydrogen can easily be extracted through condensing the droplets."

Sulfuric acid does not release any hydrogen by "condensing" the droplets. On the contrary, sulfuric acid attracts and holds any water violently. Perhaps this is the reason why there is any trace of water on Venus left at all. 84.160.239.47 22:17, 17 November 2006 (UTC)

Fixed. --Xanthine 12:30, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

The article has several apparent contradictions which need to be explained in footnotes if not the main text ie "sulpher dioxide is 150 parts per million." No mention of sulpher trioxide which should be in surplus if there is "no water." It says 6 parts per million of water vapor in another part of the article. I suppose the problem is the composition of Earth's atmosphere is typically given as gas only and particulates such as dust, sulpheric acid, ice and water droplets are discussed separately. Also, Earth atmosphere scientists typically include the carbon dioxide vapor percentage, but not the water vapor percentage; just the opposite of how we have figured Venus, perhaps because the lower atmosphere of Venus is hot enough that carbon dioxide is a gas, not a vapor, as it is in Earth's atmosphere. Neil


The text includes the conjecture that Venus' atmosphere is composed of largely carbon-dioxide and nitrogen mixture because of the lack of a strong magnetic field, lighter gases not being held because of the lack of a strong magnetic field as Earth has. That would hold true also for Mars, which has a largely carbon dioxide-nitrogen atmosphere (if much thinner).

A simpler explanation exists: Venus is hot. Magnetic fields do not hold gases so effectively as does gravity. The Earth has high enough gravitation and cooler temperatures to hold gases as light as methane, ammonia, and water vapor. To be sure, the Earth's atmosphere holds little methane or ammonia because of thermodynamic instability in an oxygen-rich environment, but it holds water vapor very well. It's, of course, gravitation. A strong magnetic field may prevent some chemical reactions in the Earth's upper atmosphere, preventing the formation of such substances as sulfuric acid, but that is a different topic.

Venus is much hotter at its surface, hot enough that with gravity slighter (but not by much!) than the Earth's, Venus cannot hold gases as light as methane, ammonia, and water vapor. Much chillier than Earth, but with far lesser gravity, Mars likewise cannot hold water vapor. With their combinations of temperature and gravitation, both Mars and Venus can hold atmospheres consisting largely of carbon dioxide and nitrogen. --Paul from Michigan 01:49, 25 November 2006 (UTC)

If proponents of Gaia theory are to be believed, a major reason for the water on Earth is due to the abundant presence of life. Indeed, all living things capable of aerobic respiration produce water as a matter of discourse. Venus and Mars, on the other hand, have atmospheres relatively close to their equilibrium states (Mars more so than Venus). Interestingly enough, Lovelock discusses this in the first of his Gaia books, calculating that if Earth were to be left to form an equilibrium state (ie: if all life were somehow wiped out), it's atmosphere would be ~95% carbon dioxide and it's surface temperature would be in the region of 250 centigrade. Makes you think, doesn't it...? --Xanthine 12:30, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

Life is of course a non-equilibrium state. Under equilibrium, water would react with carbon and carbon compounds to form carbon dioxide, and with sulfur and sulfur compounds to form sulfuric acid. As is well known one can place carbon and sulfur in cold water and have no reactions.

Biochemistry itself suggests that life formed on Earth from a mixture of substances, some of which would not exist long in an oxygen-rich environment. Of course, water, carbon oxides (whether carbon monoxide or carbon dioxide), and phosphates exist. But most biochemical substances are methane derivatives. Ammonia and hydrogen sulfide would have to have existed.

Living things (plants) can synthesize methane derivatives from carbon dioxide and water and can transform mitrites and nitrates into ammonia. Some bacteria 'fix' mitrogen. But that is life at work.

Most predictions of the future of the Earth suggest that as the sun becomes more luminous, that unless the Earth's orbit becomes adequately displaced from where it is now (I believe that if humanity or some intelligent successor is around, that creature is likely to force the Earth into orbitd progressively more distant from the sun as needed), the Earth will get hotter. The Earth is toward the warm end of the life zone, and when the normal temperature on Earth approaches 45C, life will be in big trouble. Much of the biomass will die and become fuel for spectacular forest and brush fires that will thrust more carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, accelerating global warming. Higher evaporation of water will have added another greenhouse gas -- water vapor -- into the atmosphere. Atom for atom, water vapor is an even more powerful greenhouse gas.

Around 70C, the 'wet greenhouse' effect that some say occurred early on Venus takes off, and the Earth's atmosphere itself takes on the characteristics of a pressure cooker. Meanwhile, the greater pressure of the atmosphere causes the atmospheric temperature to rise in accordance with the gas laws. The process accelerates as more of the waters of the sea evaporate into the atmosphere. Some water vapor goes to the upper atmosphere and some water molecules dissociate into oxygen and hydrogen, hydrogen going off into space. Until the seas are evaporated away, there's more water vapor available to replace the water dissociated into oxygen and water.

At 305 C, the critical temperature of water, liquid water no longer exists. By then, even if the Earth has gigantic clouds protecting the planet from sunlight, pressure alone creates hothouse conditions. (Venus is hot because of the pressure of its atmosphere -- not because of the intense sunlight that shines upon cloud layers that insulate the planet). Carbonate rocks dwxompose, releasing carbon dioxide, and pressures lead to temperatures high enough to melt surface rocks.

Gory, isn't it? The earth's atmosphere would be full of oxygen from dissociated water, carbon dioxide first from the budning of biomass and petroleum and then especially the release of it from carbonate rocks, sulfuric acid from the burning of sulfur and sulfur compounds, a little nitrogen, and some water vapor. The Earth could get even hotter than Venus is today -- hot enough to melt all rock surfaces. That's all long before the Sun flares off the atmosphere and beats down upon the exposed surface of the Earth.

That all depends upon the extinction of complex life. We might not have the means -- yet -- of altering the Earth's orbit. But humanity or whatever its successor at the time (advanced pigs?) will likely cherish life enough to get the Hell out of an infernal prospect. The Gaia effect got little chance on Venus or Mars. It may need some help a few hundred milliion years hence just to continue. Sure, this is speculation, and as such 'original research'... probably forgivable in a talk page. --Paul from Michigan 10:20, 14 January 2007 (UTC)

Surely speculation is the entire point of a talk page! :) I'd love to continue this conversation, but I fear it'll soon venture too far off topic... --Xanthine 12:57, 23 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] How hot is Venus?

How much hotter is Venus than Earth?

It's a lot hotter if you compare surface temperatures to surface temperatures -- 288K to 750K. But, if you compare atmospheric temperatures at the same pressures, say at 1 Bar, the difference is a lot less dramatic. Earth's 1 Bar temperature is 288K while Venus' is 360K. If you also subtract out the extra temperature due to Venus having to shed more heat from solar radiation, the difference in atmosphere temperature is around 20 K -- a whole lot less than the almost 500 degree difference in surface temperatures.

This means that the extra heat at the surface is coming from adiabatic compression (extra pressure), not from extra solar radiation or greenhouse effect. I've written up an article explaining this more fully, and posted it at

http://www.whiteworld.com/non-fic/Venus-temp.htm

I'd like to get an external link reference put in this article, if I could.

Cyreenik 15:31, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

Venus is so immensely hot, that a cat on a hot tin roof would stay on the roof, if it just knew how lucky it was. Said: Rursus 08:37, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
35 km above Venus's surface, the temperature is as hot as a typical baking or cooking oven. (See your cookbooks, if you're in America, there'll probably be quite a few references to 350 degrees Fahrenheit, which translates into 177 degrees Celsius, or 450 Kelvin. I dunno what it's like in other countries.)68.36.214.143 (talk) 00:12, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Extreme cold! (Brrrhh!)

There is a "Cryosphere" mentioned at esa.int. It's at 90-120 km height. Said: Rursus 08:43, 29 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Good article nomination

  • "Looks good" to me, except the last images at the bottom illustrating future missions need to be better sourced. One just says "from NASA", the other says "from university, presumably copied from NASA." Potatoswatter (talk) 21:53, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
I added a direct link to NASA site for the first image. I temporally removed the second one because I can not find it on the NASA server. Ruslik (talk) 05:58, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

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[edit] GA review

I've signed up to review this, and I'll put comments when I get a chance for a thorough read Jimfbleak (talk) 11:05, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

  • Intro: see Wikipedia:Lead section. The lead seems the weakest part of the article. It should not exceed four paras, and the current fifth para is just one sentence. The lead gives too much detail in some places (eg percentage of atm. gases), but doesn't mention some of the main headings at all. Intro needs a bit of work. Jimfbleak (talk) 11:19, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
I made a few changes in the lead section. Ruslik (talk) 11:40, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
  • Consistency and formatting. Careful copy edit is needed
  1. Venusian should be capitalised. Venus' or Venus's? both are used, inconsistent
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. units wander at random, eg K OC, sometimes both, also km/kilometres, shouldn't use both - I think it should be km
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. I note that there are no conversions to imperial, is there a justification for this?
It was decided some time ago not to use them in the planetary articles. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1.  % or percent, not both
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. it is, not it's
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. I would italicise in situ, is form used correct?
I would not because in NASA pages it is written without italicisation (Venus in Situ Explorer). Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. refs should follow punctuation, some are in front of or not next to punctuation
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. I've not gone through in detail yet, but in the "composition" section "D" as in D/H ratio appears out of the blue, no gloss or link to deuterium
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. not a big deal, but would the green timeline look better centred? Also a lot of white space above it in my machine.
Removed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
I'll go through in detail, do refs, images etc when i next get time. Jimfbleak (talk) 15:40, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
  • references
  1. ref 3 appears to be dead
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. At FA (not GA) you will now have to write journal names in full. However, you do need to have spaces between the abbreviated forms (refs 1 and 8 at least)
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. ref 10, need isbn 10, not 13, otherwise link doesn't work
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. ref 18, stray ]
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. ref 22, I think (PDF) is preferred (also in other refs), also link is only to a buy-this page, seems pointless
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. ref 27 appears to be dead
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. ref 33 linkspam, no link would be better than to a commercial sales site
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. ref 44 looks very strange, Vancouver WA? also appears to be dead
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

Jimfbleak (talk) 16:05, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

Jimfbleak (talk) 16:05, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
  • final read through: I’ve done some minor fixes, the following still need attention.
  1. Intro: and the rise of the levels of greenhouse gases that followed clunky
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. Composition: including some based on hydrogen, such as hydrogen chloride (HCl) and hydrogen fluoride (HF), nitrogen and sulfur, as well as the some carbon monoxide, water vapour and molecular oxygen Nitrogen and sulphur don’t contain hydrogen, “as well as the some”??
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. Troposphere: The enormous amount of CO2 in the atmosphere together with water vapour and sulfur dioxide create a strong greenhouse effect, number agreement
There is no disagreement in my opinion. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. Upper atmosphere and ionosphere: The maximum electron volume density— Do we need an explanation of evd? Also no dash after quoted volume in this sentence
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
  1. Induced magnetosphere: The reason for its absence are not clear, number agreement. (0.3 Rv) no explanation of unit here
Fixed. Ruslik (talk) 07:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
I think that's all I can see now Jimfbleak (talk) 05:51, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
missed two "vapour", fixed now Jimfbleak (talk) 07:33, 30 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Good Article assessment

GA review (see here for criteria)
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Nice article and a good read Jimfbleak (talk) 09:56, 30 April 2008 (UTC)