Talk:Atlas Vampire

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[edit] Wording?

The wording here is unsatisfactory, as it implies that the killer is known as the "Vampire Murder Case". However, I'm not entirely sure how best to reword it - any ideas? Jon Rob 13:27, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Im quite late, sorry, but i do agree. how about:

_{The Atlas Vampire is the nickname given to the unknown assailant who committed the unsolved "Vampire Murder" (also known as the Vampire Murder Case) in Stockholm, Sweden in 1932.}

any better? ← κεηηε∂γ ^{(talk) (contribs)} 14:40, 14 March 2008 (UTC)

Changed now, looks much better than it did. -- Scar † Contributions † 19:44, 30 April 2008 (UTC)