Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Enocean

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This page is an archive of the proposed deletion of the article below. Further comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or on a Votes for Undeletion nomination). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result of the debate was keep. Article was rewritten before the VFD debate time expired. Therefore the "conditional" keep votes will be counted as "keep"s. Sjakkalle (Check!) 11:26, 31 August 2005 (UTC)

[edit] Enocean

Wall 'o text advertisement for a battery company. Fernando Rizo T/C 10:49, 24 August 2005 (UTC)

  • Keep seems notable from web site... needs a rewrite.... BADLY --Ryan Norton T | @ | C 11:20, 24 August 2005 (UTC)
  • Comment. VfD notice was removed by the article creator (84.180.58.222). I replaced it. --GraemeL (talk) 11:53, 24 August 2005 (UTC)
  • Keep if a rewrite is possible, otherwise delete. -- Kjkolb 12:26, August 24, 2005 (UTC)
  • Keep if a rewrite is done within vfd period, otherwise delete as per Kjkolb Dlyons493 13:10, 24 August 2005 (UTC)
  • Delete unless someone majorly rewrites this. IMO it borderlines on NN, but could probably be redone to conform to decent writing standards and be a more notable article.--Isotope23 14:36, 24 August 2005 (UTC)
  • Delete --PhilipO 20:04, August 24, 2005 (UTC)
  • If someone could rewrite this it would be worth keeping. Optichan 20:33, August 24, 2005 (UTC)
  • This appears to be a patchwork of promotional material from the company's website. For example, the first paragraph basically consists of a large chunk from the company profile (PDF - see page 2). The second paragraph is lifted directly from the descriptive paragraph used at the end of a number of press releases. -Aranel ("Sarah") 01:03, 25 August 2005 (UTC)
  • Delete - advert - Tεxτurε 16:30, 29 August 2005 (UTC)
  • Keep - I have rewritten the entry. I hope it is now conform to Wikipedia rules. F. Elstner, Chemnitz, Germany 07:20, August 30, 2005.
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in an undeletion request). No further edits should be made to this page.