Talk:Artemis Fowl: The Opal Deception

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[edit] 1 Q?

Ya know how it says Holly only fired six shots? Well, she only fired 1 shot at Root. Therefore, she could have fired the other five into the motors.

[edit] Éire/Ireland

I have changed the 'country' of this novel from Éire to Ireland. According to the Wikipedia article "Éire": "The name [Éire] was given in Article 4 of the 1937 Irish constitution to the Irish state, created under the 1921 Anglo-Irish Treaty, which was known between 1922 and 1937 as the Irish Free State. Article 4 stated that: "The name of the state is Éire, or, in the English language, Ireland." Article 8 states that Irish is the first official language.[1] Since 1949, the term Republic of Ireland has generally been used in preference to Éire, when speaking English." As this is an English-language encyclopedia, we should use the English-language name. Cdlw93 04:23, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] whole article

As with the plot summaries for books 2 and 3, this one is too long and poorly written. The section on the code also has some badly written bits. -144.132.24.90 10:28, 18 May 2007 (UTC)

I know I'm replying after a year, but I just discovered this article and am working, paragraph by paragraph, to shorten the plot summary. IceUnshattered (talk) 20:50, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Cave

"After this, she progressed to trick Captain Holly Short and Commander Julius Root into a cave, where she straps a bomb onto Root's chest."

I have changed 'cave' to 'magma chute', but I feel that it needs a better description. If somebody could think of one, it would be much appreciated.

[edit] Spoilers and Intro

Where's the spoiler warning and why is the first bit, the intro before the plot section, in italics?