Talk:April Masini

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This page does not "promote some entity" and is an entry surrounding an author and advice expert. I've read most of her books and have done extensive online research to write the page and include all my sources. How can I make it less like a promotion? As far as I can tell, the article is factual.

[edit] Rewrite the page?

Maybe it's time to totally rewrite the page, as the tag says, if this does indeed have enough notability. mike4ty4 (talk) 20:16, 24 March 2008 (UTC)

I just did rewrite the page. Before, I took most of the content off April Masini's website; this time I took information from various magazine articles and websites. Could you tell me what makes the article look like it's promoting "some entity," so that I can fix it? Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Susieand (talk • contribs) 20:53, 24 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Formatting refs

You made a good try at inline refs but that's not how to do it. I moved the first ref inline to show you how. I'll leave the rest up to you but if you have any questions, feel free to ask me. The other thing you should do is add wikilinks from this article to other articles. Just put square brackets around words that you think are the names of other articles. Sbowers3 (talk) 01:17, 3 April 2008 (UTC)