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[edit] First song in space?
Under "Mission Highlights", article states:
The crew sang "Happy Birthday" on March 8, 1969, recorded in the Guiness Book of World Records as the first song sung in space.
I have removed the words "recorded in the Guiness Book of Records as the first song sung in space". This is incorrect. See the "First song sung in space?" discussion in the Yuri Gagarin entry for more detail. --Ya mikew 04:53, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
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