Talk:American Federation of Teachers/Comments
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[edit] Haus42's Comments
Solid B. Will need TLC to get to GA.
- Referencing and citation: iffy. Looks a little light on notes. Compare to Domenico Selvo.
- Coverage and accuracy: looks good.
- Structure: probably the biggest weakness
- Recommend change Trivia section to Notable Members.
- There are two sections that are about 1 line long. Suggests weakness in sectioning.
- Grammar: mostly fine, but needs a few passes.
- Some iffy language: "battle royale," "preK," "the devil with fire..."
- "Political and civil rights activities" is listy
- "Post-1970s history" is listy
- Supporting materials: not checked
Some interesting pictures would help. Haus42 02:07, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
