Talk:Action Request System

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I removed the advertisement tag and reworded parts of the article which tended to read like marketing text. Hopefully I got it all. This article should inform the reader about the AR System without attempting to persuade them to purchase it. Any further ideas to make this article more encyclopedic are welcome. Perhaps a section indicating competing products and the differences? Or is that a step in the wrong direction? Maybe just links to competing products? For the record, I am biased in that I make my living by developing and customizing AR System applications, and I am a fan of the AR System, but I am also a fan of Wikipedia, and I want this article to be nuetral. -Armaced 18:24, 19 January 2007 (UTC)

Perhaps a section for features missing from the AR System, or general criticism of the AR System (not relational, thick api)? -Armaced 18:29, 19 January 2007 (UTC)