Talk:Aberdare National Park

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"Completing the lovely picture is the belief of the traditional Kikuyu that the Aberdare Mountain Range, where this park is located, is one of the homes of Ngai, or God." This doesn't really seem appropriate language in an encyclopedia. 76.176.31.101 23:28, 30 May 2007 (UTC)

Agreed, it reads like a brochure. I am going to be bold and make some edits Trugster 19:42, 10 June 2007 (UTC)