Talk:A Scandal in Bohemia

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[edit] 69 Flaws

This article has the readability of a brick wall. It currently has sixty nine (69) commas. People who do not pass remedial writing should not be allowed to contribute to Wikipedia.

A comma is NOT inserted because the writer has a temporary blackout. It is NOT the written equivalent of 'UH' or 'UM'.

I am sorry but if these anonymous 'US' contributors cannot do better with our language we shall be forced to take it back.