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[edit] Re: Jean-François Miniac

Hello - thanks for the message.

The content you've added to the article helps. An author/illustrator with several books is certainly notable, but that was not clear before you put in more material. When you've finished adding the content, tell me and I will clean up the English.

I do have one suggestion: In the section you've titled "English press", there are three writers and news sources, and it needs the URL and the title of the news article too.

Article now:

"Ned Baumann, The Guardian, August 23 2007" which doesn't give enough information

Article needs:

'Ned Baumann, http://guardian.co.uk/Katieisgreat, "KrakatoaKatie is Great", BBC News, August 23 2007.'

I hope that's clear – the bolded parts are missing and need to be added. You can use {{Cite news}} and {{Cite web}} to help.

Do not worry about your English skill, because I will clean the article's English up when you have all the information in the article. You're doing fine. :-) Thanks again – KrakatoaKatie 15:50, 4 September 2007 (UTC)