Talk:71st Regiment of Foot, Fraser's Highlanders

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[edit] Regarding tone of article

This article has 1st person references, and it also sounds like a handbook or brochure. contribsSTYROFOAM☭1994TALK 15:57, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Or it sounds like somebody's term paper. Sbowers3 (talk) 04:00, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
After three or four days of editing, I think I have cleaned it up in a major way; it still needs direct cites in the article but I think it reads a lot better now, and much of the trivia has been removed. I also added images and put the article in the proper categories. I'm sure others can be added.139.48.25.61 (talk) 20:43, 12 June 2008 (UTC)