User talk:69.202.60.86

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(too short) and not comprehensive. OK? --Brískelly[citazione necessaria] 17:17, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

The article isn't good-wrote: there are many grammatical errors, for example, or there aren't some sections. --Brískelly[citazione necessaria] 17:23, 24 December 2007 (UTC)
Other motivations: all the sections are too shorts; the section history gives not all the fundamental informations. This article is away-from-good-prose, or, in Italian, lontano dalla bella prosa. --Brískelly[citazione necessaria] 17:26, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Peter Jennings Marriage to Kayce Freed

69.202.60.86: I hope I have adequately spelled out for you why I think your POV edit is ill-considered. Also, I believe I have responded to most all of your various quibblings and accusations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 4.249.111.232 (talk) 17:15, 25 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Introduction to Evolution

Your commentary on the Introduction to Evolution featured article attempt is actively being discussed on Talk:Introduction to evolution. It would be most appreciated if you would be kind enough to contribute to the dialog there. It may be that your concerns have been addressed. If not, then further guidance would be appreciated. The page should be well organized; if you go to the bottom and scroll up you should be able to locate your specific concern which I took the liberty of copying/pasting to this page. Many thanks for following up on the discussion.--Random Replicator (talk) 23:34, 6 January 2008 (UTC)