User talk:67.84.98.124

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How do go about a compromise on this? As a senior member of the NYG and a former army officer, I feel rather strongly about this, as do many of our NCOs.

[edit] NY Guard Uniforms

Hi, and welcome to wikipedia. Sorry that it took a while to catch your comments here; a better place to put them would have been the talk page for the New York Guard ( Talk:New York Guard ) article itself.

There are two major reasons, I see, that people have been removing your comments on the uniforms for the New York Guard.

The first is simply a matter of placement. Information about the uniforms does not belong in the first paragraph of the article, where the most important information belongs. I started a separate section about the uniforms farther down in the article.
The second reason the information is getting deleted is that you present it as unverifiable opinion and hearsay. If you can point to some news-source citing widespread dissatisfaction amongst NCO's then by all means include that information and cite it ( a link will do just fine at first ).

I hope this is helpful. --Cjs56 (talk) 01:32, 30 April 2008 (UTC)