Talk:1966 Liberty Bowl
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[edit] GA Review
I have decided to review this article. I have a few comments before I pass or fail it.
- A then-record 39,101 tickets were sold for the game, but due to 36-degree temperatures at game time, only 25,012 spectators attended - There is a source at the end of the sentence that states that the attendance was 39, 101. The statement written here says the attendance was 25,012. If only 25,012 spectators attended, can a source be found for that?
- The game was Virginia Tech's second bowl game in team history - Does that mean this is the second time that the Liberty Bowl was held in Virginia Tech?
- The whole sentence The game was Virginia Tech's second bowl game in team history, and the game marked the second time that Virginia Tech had played Miami needs to be sources.
- In the first half, Tech held Miami to just 16 yards of total offense, and Miami set bowl game records for fewest rushing yards allowed and fewest first downs allowed. - The sentence should be two separate sentences, to look like, In the first half, Tech held Miami to just 16 yards of total offense. Miami set bowl game records for fewest rushing yards allowed and fewest first downs allowed.
Once these concerns are addressed, please leave me a comment on my talk page. Thank you! iMatthew 2008 18:28, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
Thank you for making the changes! I am passing this article. iMatthew 2008 20:37, 24 March 2008 (UTC)