User talk:195.198.161.217

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[edit] February 2008

Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia. However, please do not add promotional material to articles, as you did to SWOT analysis. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" is strongly discouraged. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. dionyziz (talk) 00:46, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

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[edit] Re: SWOT Analysis

Hello. I apologize if my recent rollback and warning were inappropriate. However, visiting the relevant pages makes me still think that the product is a commercial solution. If you have third party sources that claim otherwise, please by all means edit the article and undo my changes. Don't be afraid to be bold! However, make sure your sections are written in an encyclopaedic style, and that they don't sound like an advertisement. Again, welcome. dionyziz (talk) 01:06, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

Of course. Please make sure you revert my edits and modify your previous text so that it doesn't sound like an advertisement and that it adheres to the encyclopaedic style of Wikipedia. Make sure you cite sources that are third party (i.e. not issued by the agency which brands the product) to support your section, or your section may be removed or questioned by other editors in the future. But don't be afraid if your section isn't perfect. Some other editor will come along and fix it! Also, perhaps you want to create an account to support your edits. It's quick, free, and anonymoys (you don't have to give away any real-world information about yourself). Good luck! --dionyziz (talk) 01:33, 19 February 2008 (UTC).

Hi and thanks, I made a new effort to clean it. Bests Tord Beding

Hi, I'm sorry, but your additions seem very promotional. Please avoid adding commercial links, and take a moment to read the links Dionyziz has provided above. Thanks. Kuru talk 02:21, 19 February 2008 (UTC)

Hi again, I have now removed all text that could be misunderstood as promotion including removal of all links in my previously edit and added a scientifically link about the method. The content is now restricted to information based on fact about the SWOT-landscape form. Information about this factual development of the SWOT-analysis is of interest for the Wikipedia readers viewing this topic. Bests Tord Beding