Talk:1939-40 Winter Offensive

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[edit] Early talk

I am going to add a discussion of the actions of the various War Areas to execute the offensive and the Japanese actions/reactions to them.

I have partial oob from the account too.

As big an effort as this seems to have been I am surprised it is not better known.

So what do I need to clean up?

As to cleanup, I would suggest first and foremost putting everything into sections instead of bolded headings; check out WP:GTL for basic layout guidelines. Also, the code on the wikilinks is incorrect. Hope this helps! UnDeadGoat 17:34, 15 June 2006 (UTC)

I think this battle showed that the Chinese army was not ready to take the offensive and had a better chance of waging positional battles. BlueShirts 23:50, 20 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Difficult to read

This is a really difficult article to read. I think the editors of it should start by creating a good framework to build off of. Oberiko 14:34, 6 October 2007 (UTC)