Talk:Yusef Hawkins

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[edit] Revising opening paragraphs

. . . to conform more closely to the actual N.Y. Times news reports.

  • cause of the confrontation
  • no NYT mention of a 'street gang'
  • not all the suspects were of Italian descent
  • the many repetitions of 'Italian-American' make for POV
  • the hyphenated-American background of the entire crowd involved is not known.


Yes, a terrible crime was committed that night, but I think this entire article could stand a POV review. --CliffC 04:58, 9 October 2006 (UTC)

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