User talk:You Can't See Me!

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i've responded to your comment, i wasn't sure if you were watching the page so i thought i'd leave you a message. -Zappernapper 15:41, 12 November 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for the notification. I had forgotten. You Can't See Me! 04:14, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Plot of Naruto by arc

Sorry about not seeing your comment on the episode list; I'd taken that off of my watchlist a few weeks ago. Anyway, I got tired of writing plot summaries after the Tsunade arc, and asked someone else to write the Sasuke Retrieval arc in my stead. By the time I got around to asking someone to do that, however, the handful of people that had supported the idea seemed to have lost interest. Also, this is somewhat disheartening and doesn't give the impression that this little project would be very successful.

If you want to revive the idea, feel free to do so and I'll pitch in where I can. I think Plot of Naruto II has enough information for each arc to simply be split up amongst multiple articles with little re-writing. Given the four arcs that I've already done (albeit in more detail than necessary), that would just leave the Sasuke Retrieval and the filler arcs to be put in single article form. The prospect of writing another arc doesn't interest me at the moment, so someone else would need to write these two. Also, having not watched the fillers, I really don't know how to how to effectively split them up, so someone else would need to come up with a method for that as well.

So, yeah, I still like the idea, especially since I loathe the concept of 220+ episode summaries, but Wikipeida seems to favor those 220+ articles instead of around 12. Should you (or someone else) decide to write those two (or more, depending on what is done with the fillers) articles, we could try the experiment and see how it plays out. ~SnapperTo 23:58, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

It starts off good, but everything after Sasuke's "death" gets kind of skimpy on the details. I'd suggest re-expanding that area a little more. This area also gets visually short, and stylistically two sentence paragraphs aren't very attractive. I'd suggest combining these short paragraphs should they remain short. Save these qualms, it's a good job, though I'd make sure your names for things match its name elsewhere on Wikipedia (Multiple Shadow Clone Technique instead of Mass Shadow Clone Technique). ~SnapperTo 20:54, 28 March 2007 (UTC)