Talk:Word Of Life
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[edit] Cleanup needed
Article looks messy. Needs wikifying, categorizing, etc. Perhaps it should also be moved or renamed. Currently, Word of Life (small "o", which seems to be the correct spelling [1]) is a redirect to Livets Ord. Entheta 23:01, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
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- I've reworked the entire article, trying to give it NPOV, remove unnecessary information, make it encyclopedic, rearrange to a more logical order, add a few links, and just generally polish up the writing. I'd love for someone else to have a look and see what I've missed; I think after it goes past a few sets of eyes it might actually be a decent article. Most importantly, it still needs several citations (some places tagged, some not).--edi 07:51, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
Agree it should not be a redirect to the Swedish name as they internationally call themselves Word of Life. Their international logo only states Word of Life, it does not include fellowship when I've encountered it. Lindacse 22:56, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Redirects and Disambig.
I believe it would be more logical to create a disambiguation page for both spellings of Word Of Life. I'll go ahead and do this in a few days if no one objects. this note will be left on both pages. --Master Runner 22:45, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
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- How about renaming the Word Of Life to Word of Life Fellowship which seems to be their name according to their website [2], make Word of Life a disambiguation page linking to that article and this one? Entheta 19:43, 15 July 2006 (UTC) (this message has been posted on both discussion pages).
Though registered as Word Of Life Fellowship almost no one associated refers to them as that. In that case most people looking for information would search for Word Of Life or Word of Life. a disambiguation page is a very smart idea. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 203.220.146.156 (talk • contribs).
- Yes a disambig page would probably be the best idea. But when a disambiguation page is made on Word of Life, this article needs to be renamed since Word Of Life is just too similar to Word of Life, IMO (my suggestion is redirecting Word Of Life to a disambig page at Word of Life), and for that, Word of Life Fellowship might be a good title. Entheta 13:21, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Obvious NPOV Violation
The article reads almost like a pamphlet for the organization. There are numerous uses of the First Person, and certain words are emphasized. Moreover, some of the wording used sounds like a promotion. Obviously, this article needs to be totally revised and given an NPOV. Kazhivlad 08:24, 25 November 2006 (UTC)