Talk:William Beynon
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[edit] To do to improve
- photo would be nice
- in-line citation
- a bit more citation (there is a good start already)
- any more external links available?
- the current article comes off sounding mre like a list without being a list, so wordsmithing is needed
- maybe if more details are added to each of the periods described the article would sound less like a list
- along with the wordsmithing, punctuation style would be prudent.
Please cross off these when they have been completed. Thanks. CJLippert 02:07, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
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