Talk:William Beynon

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[edit] To do to improve

  • photo would be nice
  • in-line citation
  • a bit more citation (there is a good start already)
  • any more external links available?
  • the current article comes off sounding mre like a list without being a list, so wordsmithing is needed
  • maybe if more details are added to each of the periods described the article would sound less like a list
  • along with the wordsmithing, punctuation style would be prudent.

Please cross off these when they have been completed. Thanks. CJLippert 02:07, 30 March 2007 (UTC)