Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/World War II Online

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[edit] World War II Online

Many improvements have been made since the last peer review was done. Screenshots have been included, sections on the developers of the game, common criticisms, requirements, et cetera, have been added. I'm submitting a Request for Review to get a general consensus of where the article is currently at according to the rest of the members of the project, so that can hopefully be made a GA eventually. (USMA2010 03:38, 18 October 2006 (UTC))

First of all, I think this has the potential to be an FA but.....to improve it, I'd say
  • the lead needs to be expanded (WP:LEAD). While I'm not an expert on leads, I'd say it should accuratly summarize the article and have a little bit about every section.
  • Also this article will never pass GA nom if it does not have inline citations. This article has no references whatsoever and based on it's size, it desperatly needs some. If you need a place to look for well referenced video games, go here if you haven't already. here's a good place for help as well.
  • Finally, as a general rule, you don't want external links anywhere except in the external links section. Put the gallery stuff at the end with the other external links, which you have done well with. As a side note to that, you might consider adding mobygames to the external references. Although there's a heated debate about it for a couple games, almost all game articles have the link to Moby.
Great article, but here's a couple things to work on.--Clyde Miller 20:45, 18 October 2006 (UTC)