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[edit] Dynasty Warriors 4

Been improving this article and am looking for it to eventually reach GA status and I need to know where it can be improved. Crimsonfox 17:30, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

As I said on the article talk page, some more sources in the Story and Expansions sections would be great. I nom'd it for GA as well. --PresN 16:55, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

• The article could use a lot more sourcing, especially the Story portion. 13 References is far too few for an article this size. Likewise, the prose of the article could be tightened. The Gameplay section tends to wander from subject to subject within a paragraph, before returning to the original thought. It might flow better for the Gameplay to roughly follow the flow of the actual game... For example, moving the item equipping to the beginning of the Gameplay section and mentioning traditional gameplay concepts carried over from Dynasty Warriors 3 before introducing new concepts. The characters section could probably be removed, or perhaps rolled into Setting (which should be grouped with other Plot items like Story). Cheers, Lankybugger 00:13, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

Referenced out Wei/Wu story almost completely but I have to work on Shu still. I've also moved the sections so they flow more now, same with the gameplay section: Aim -> Starting officers -> Items -> Story -> Features of these stages etc Crimsonfox 09:40, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Shu Story completely ref'ed now, a tiny bit to do on Wu and Wei. Read through and sorted out punctuation best I could. Crimsonfox 12:24, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

Expansions referenced. Crimsonfox 18:51, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

• We've managed to get it to GA now (Hurrah) and obviously wanting to get it to FA-class. Are they any tips that people can give so we can get it up there? And I know it could do with some images, working on them. Thanks. Crimsonfox 18:27, 28 March 2007 (UTC)