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[edit] London Wasps

I've added a peer review request in order to get feedback on what the article needs to push up it's class.... Murkee 11:52, 30 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Shudda's review

I think you should look at some WP:FA and WP:GA quality rugby union team articles for help on getting this to a higher standard, for example Crusaders (rugby). Anyway, specific advise:

  • Expand the lead as per WP:LEAD (you prob want to do this after having done everything else).
  • Expand the history section 1968-1994.
  • Add references to the history section, it's seriously lacking here. (Added fact check template - Murkee)
  • Convert what external links you have in the text to inline citations.
  • The stadia section needs a copy-edit. It's currently a bunch of paragraphs that are a sentence or two.
  • Please add some sort of key, or footnotes to explain the international column of the current squad section. I understand what U19, 7's and A mean, but others may not.
  • Add a notable players section, but make sure it's de-listed. Maybe discuss how this should be composed on the talk page (see Crusaders (rugby) and All Blacks for inspiration).
  • Wasps abroad? Whats that about? It should be explained or removed (i don't know what it is about at all). (Edit: Attempt made to address this - Murkee)
  • Director of rugby - is that the same as coach? This should have an introductory paragraph, and if it is the same as coach should be expanded and completed.

Thats all I have at the moment, hope it helps! - Shudda talk 04:37, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] GordyB

  • I removed the 'See also' section as it is inappropraite to link to a userbox template. < DONE
  • I suggest you tidy up the 'Supporters abroad' section as bits of it aren't grammatical. < DONE (I think)
  • The history section can be expanded, there is a website that I added to the project mainpage called 'Nobok', IIRC they have a history of Wasps article.GordyB 15:21, 1 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Goldman

  • Expand the section on stadiums
  • Create a section on colours/logos/kits
  • Create a section on rivals/traditions/etc (eg. London double headers)
  • Fill in all the [citation needed], as it looks messy. Greatly expand the earlier histories. Goldman07 02:16, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
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