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[edit] Stephen Decatur

Hoping to receive a review of the article on the overall accuracy, mechanics, construction and quality of the article. This is one of my first articles I have expanded more or less and I would value any and all suggestions on how to improve. Auror 21:03, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

Very nice start! A few suggestions:

  • Add an {{Infobox Military Person}}.
  • Combine some of the very short early sections. Unless there's significant material to be added, everything until the Barbary War could probably be merged.
  • Inline citations would be nice to have.
  • A longer lead section would be appropriate. Any other additions of material would also be helpful, of course.

Overall, though, this looks quite good. Kirill Lokshin 08:40, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Cuomo111

Well-written, well-researched, well-referenced and the structure and layout of the article is easy to read. Kudos to you, sir! --Cuomo111 01:09, 22 June 2006 (UTC)

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