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[edit] Operation Igloo White

I thought I had removed this article from the A-Class review list (since it was not completed), but was mistaken. Am seeking constructive criricism. RM Gillespie 15:34, 4 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

A few thoughts, in no particular order:

  • The objection made during the last A-Class review regarding the lack of technical data is still applicable, I think; the article says very little about how the actual sensor systems worked. If this information is still classified, then that fact should be explicitly mentioned in the article.
  • The lead needs to be quite a bit longer in order to serve as a basically stand-alone summary of the article.
  • The "Conclusion" section is rather weasel-worded (e.g. "Even today scholars are divided on the merits of the electronic barrier system..."); I would expect a more explicit discussion of various historians and how they regard the operation.

Kirill Lokshin 21:46, 4 February 2007 (UTC)

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