Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Siffin

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[edit] Battle of Siffin

I've massively rewritten and changed the article, because it was not in an acceptable state previously. But this is my first attempt at an article and I'd appreciate feedback. Thank you. Salim555 01:55, 21 July 2006 (UTC)Salim555

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

Not a bad start. Some things to consider:

  • The article needs to cite its sources (typically done via footnotes). As it is, there's very little of the article that can be easily traced to an outside reference.
  • Images would be helpful. One obvious one is a map, if you can obtain one.
  • The lead section can be lengthened to two/three paragraphs.

Working through these points—particularly the first one—should strengthen the article quite substantially. Kirill Lokshin 05:03, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Wandalstouring

  • images: a map showing the location of the battle, some geographical features and the positions of the camps could do. Wandalstouring 11:36, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
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