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[edit] Battle of Greece

This article has been greatly improved recently. I want it to eventually be promoted to FA-class but I need your help! Periklis* 07:15, 15 October 2006 (UTC)

  • Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 22:42, 30 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Kirill Lokshin

Quite nice. Some suggestions:

  • More citations! There are still {{citation needed}} tags in the article at the moment.
  • The images are quite crowded; I would suggest interleaving them along both margins rather than stacking along only the right one.
  • The "References", "Further reading", and "External links" sections don't really need to be in a smaller font.
  • Get rid of the "See also" section; if it's not worth linking in the text, it's generally not worth linking at all.
  • Some way of getting rid of the giant template at the bottom would be great. It may have to wait until somebody actually creates Portal:World War II, though.
  • Shortening some of the section titles might be appropriate, if that's possible. For the narrative ones, giving the corresponding dates in parentheses may also be a good idea.

Hope that helps! Kirill Lokshin 01:12, 16 October 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, it does help, and I will be sure to act on your suggestions. Periklis* 08:43, 17 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] UberCryxic

Overall, great article. My only significant suggestion is to get a copyedit before you nominate for FA. Contact me when you're and I'll glady give it one.UberCryxic 02:26, 16 October 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, I might hold you to that ; ) Periklis* 08:43, 17 October 2006 (UTC)
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