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[edit] Finnish Civil War

After looking at this one for assessment, it seems up to scratch. Carom 04:31, 21 September 2006 (UTC)

  • Support. Kyriakos 05:05, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Support Critical comments for further improvement : a little cleaning for consistency would improve the readability ("Civil War", "Finnish Civil War" and "War of the Year 1918" are used throughout - pick one), and there is potential for more consistent linking (years are sporadically linked) Medains 09:40, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Oppose The intro needs a rewrite and overall I am not a big fan of the writing style employed throughout the article. It also needs a big time edit to make it sound more professional. Great info in the article but needs some major editing.--Looper5920 11:09, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Oppose as per Looper5920'comments. The article definitly needs some clean up on the writing style and structures.--Dryzen 13:43, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Oppose as per Looper and Dryzen. The writing style could use some work, particularly in the intro, but once that is done, I think this is an excellent candidate in all other respects. LordAmeth 18:07, 21 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Support, great information, and correct information as far as I can tell, a little cleanup is needed however. —MoRsΞ 11:31, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
    The nomination was closed at this point. Kirill Lokshin 16:21, 26 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Support, The article is copyedited / has been copyedited by RelHistBuff, "The intro needs a rewrite", done. --Pudeo (Talk) 16:18, 26 September 2006 (UTC)
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