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Welcome to the peer review department of WikiProject Massively multiplayer online games! We, as a project, do not have our own peer review system in place but (with the magic of templates) we are borrowing WikiProject CVG Peer review and Wikipedia's Peer review's reviews. Unfortunately, at this time we do not have archives of Wikipedia's Peer reviews.

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[edit] WikiProject CVG Peer review

[edit] Massively multiplayer online role-playing game

This article is now GA and is on it's way to FA status. How can it be improved before the FAC? Greeves (talk • contribs) 23:13, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Clyde

I took a very quick look over and found some stuff to keep you busy.

  • You need to specify what the fair use rationale is for in the first image.
  • To reach FA you need at least 1 citation per paragraph. Many are missing one (or several). For example, common features and history (two important sections) contain zero citations.
  • Convert online references to Template:cite web.

If I get a chance I'll look for some more problems.--Clyde (talk) 00:13, 27 March 2007 (UTC)

For your first point, I believe it has a fair use rationale already. Next, I'll get to referencing, but is the first paragraph alright for references though? And the conversion of the references to their proper format should be fairly easy. Thanks for the constructive criticism! Greeves (talk • contribs) 02:22, 27 March 2007 (UTC)

Well look at the image and you'll see what I meant as to your response. As to whether the first paragraph is alright for references, no it's not, since it doesn't have a single one, unless I'm looking at the wrong first paragraph.--Clyde (talk) 04:19, 27 March 2007 (UTC)

I was just wondering if there was a need to reference the first paragraph, I think we're looking at the same one; I'll get to referencing that one as well. For the image, on the image page it says:
“ It is believed that the use of this image, WoW Flying Gnomes.jpg, qualifies as fair use in the article MMORPG because:
  • Blizzard Entertainment has not released any such images into the public domain, and a replacement image could not be created that would adequately provide the same information
  • The image is web-resolution
  • The use of this image neither detracts from the game nor inhibits its salability in any way
  • The image is being used solely for informative purposes, as it serves to illustrate the form in which the game takes place
 ”
I don't know much about copyright stuff on Wikipedia, but does that not qualify as the rationale we need? Sorry to keep bugging you! Greeves (talk • contribs) 16:13, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
My mistake, I've never seen the article in question part as a sub-header and missed it. You can remove the one I put, but I may not be the only person who might miss it in the future. As to the referencing, the lead is usually one of the most heavily referenced areas in an article. To have it empty of citations was....yeah.--Clyde (talk) 00:49, 29 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] AndyZ Automatic Suggestions

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article.[?]
  • There may be an applicable infobox for this article. For example, see Template:Infobox Biography, Template:Infobox School, or Template:Infobox City.[?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • apparently
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 20 additive terms, a bit too much.
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): couldn't.
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Greeves (talk • contribs) 16:39, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Archive

[edit] WikiProject CVG Peer review

  • MMORPG - 04:01, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
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