Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive

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Please move completed articles with a final proofread date that is at least one week old and in the current month to this page.


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  1. February 2007
  2. January 2007
  3. December 2006
  4. November 2006

[edit] March 2007

  1. Drop shipping: A short article about retail and wholesaling. Mr.Z-mantalk¢ 00:33, 24 February 2007 (UTC)
    • Placed a comment in its Talk page about possibly hyphenating the title and appropriate terms within. Unimaginative Username 04:44, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
      • Done Did not hyphenate because concensus has not been reached. Galena11 19:01, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
  2. Mimic (comics) Might need some polishing, but I think it's good to go.Konczewski 22:34, 28 February 2007 (UTC)
  3. The Black Parade - Recently just failed it's first GA nomination. Was suggested to be submitted here for help. I have tried to help this article out, however, I think I could use some more help as it was stated in the GA failed comment that it had prose and redundancy problems.  Orfen User Talk | Contribs 00:55, 20 January 2007 (UTC)
    • I copyedited this, but have since become heavily involved in it, so I don't feel comfortable being the one to proofread it and slap the done tag on it. --Moralis 06:24, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
      • Done I added a couple of new ref tags and cited some issues in hidden comments in the text. See edit history for details. Galena11 20:23, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
  4. Iraklis: was in bad shape this morning. This is my first major copyedit in a long time. Please let me know if it's about finished. --Moralis
    • Done Looked pretty good, only made minor changes. Galena11 21:00, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
  5. Heinrich Quincke: An auto-translated article from WikiGermany that started out rough but should be OK now. Galena11 21:22, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
    • I just made some minor grammatical corrections. It looks good to me now. Croberts1 05:17, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
  6. Lords of the Realm II This article was in terrible shape. This is my first proofread, so I appreciate any comments and suggestions. Thanks! --Croberts1 04:48, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Nice job on the c/e, Croberts1! Just did some cleanup to eliminate wordiness, reordered sections to make sense (e.g., the Overview was at the bottom, moved it to top) etc. Galena11 23:37, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
  7. Frank Sindone: Philadelphia mobster and murderer. Galena11 18:51, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
    • DoneI corrected a couple minor grammatical mistakes. This looks done to me.Croberts1 04:10, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
  8. Mako (dance): A Tongan dance. Short. Galena11 21:22, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Looks good.Croberts1 18:37, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
  9. The Boy in the Box (Vidal, California) Listed by Wikipedia as needing fixing, I think it's all set.LittleNuccio 02:28, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
  10. Arms and Equipment Guide This looks pretty good; it's ready for a proof.Croberts1 01:58, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Fixed up the headings, a bit of wikilinking, etc. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 20:38, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
  11. Pokémon Trading Figure Game This is a short article that needs expanding, but it might as well be correct in the meantime.Croberts1 05:01, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Replaced the infobox, organized lists into a table —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 21:35, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
  12. Cricket World Cup — Currently a Featured Article Candidate. I feel that the quality of the prose is not up to mark, and there is also marked variation in writing style because of numerous contributors. May require light–medium copyedit. — Ambuj Saxena (☎) 06:58, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
    Note this is no longer an FAC and was promoted recently as a matter of fact it's due on the main page March 13, 2007. I would remove it from here but I'm not a member of the league and don't know the policies. Quadzilla99 01:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
    Moved to completed section. Galena11 23:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
  13. Robert E. Lee High School (Jacksonville) The high school where Lynard Skynard was first formed, didn't need a lot. Mr.Z-mantalk¢Review! 02:04, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Added a bit of wikilinking, reformatted the reference to use a cite template. Otherwise good! —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 15:13, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
  14. Download This Song Article on a single by MC Lars. It didn't need too much work, though I did redo one section which was quite, umm, confusing. Should be good to go now. Searles2sels (PJ) 03:08, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Needed a bit of work, especially with the links. Also, I reorganized it better into sections. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 16:12, 12 March 2007 (UTC)
  15. 2002 Mombasa hotel bombing Copyedit and fact-check (against Reference articles only).~ Otterpops 17:11, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Galena11 20:22, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
  16. Place Branding Also wikified - needs proofread and red-link removal --Wavemaster447 20:11, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Galena11 20:41, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
  17. Event Driven Architecture: Don't get it. Rintrah 07:46, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
    I can't find flaws with this one, but I'm not yet comfortable with the style. --Sigma 7 19:47, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
    Ready for final? --Sigma 7 02:18, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Galena11 20:53, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
  18. Monte Ne This article just needs a few once overs to root out some continuity and grammatical errors. --The_stuart 14:54, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
    • Isn't a few once-overs actually a thrice-over? :-) Rintrah 17:34, 23 January 2007 (UTC)
    • I've given it one once over. Trishm 01:38, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
    • Not if a few different people look over it once ;-)--The_stuart 15:04, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
    • More cleanup. Looks like all it needs now is a proof...any takers? Galena11 21:30, 10 February 2007 (UTC)
    • Looks good on a quick pass. --Sigma 7 17:22, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done --Sigma 7 13:46, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
  19. Open air concert This one was quite a piece of work - I think it was bot-translated. Gave it a very thorough re-writing, and now it needs a second eye. Hillbillygirl 10:59, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done minor tweaks and added a reference tag MarkBuckles (talk) 08:38, 19 March 2007 (UTC)
  20. Askam and Ireleth Recently promoted to good article status will need boosting up if it wants to be a featured article; a copyedit to start things off would be good. --Robdurbar 11:54, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
    • Sorry, forgot to note that I c/e'd this on 28 February. Galena11 18:12, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Done Gave it another read through, and a few (very) minor changes. I must say, I love this article - it's thorough and interesting! Hillbillygirl 22:52, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
  21. Canals in Cheshire: Pretty straightforward. Galena11 17:27, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
  22. Brooks-Baxter War: up to Factionalism within the Republican Party. Rintrah 05:30, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
  23. Coat of arms of Nabram: Polish coat of arms. Short. Galena11 17:58, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
    • I looked this over and made a couple minor grammatical corrections; however, I am uncomfortable placing it in the "done" category right now because I am not very familiar with the topic.Croberts1 04:10, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
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