Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/2006

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[edit] Thiruvananthapuram

Formal request for a peer review for this article as a way of preparing for featured article.

-- Rajith Mohan (Talk to me...) :-) 12:16, 16 September 2006 (UTC)

  • Comment. Haven't gone through the article in detail, so just a few passing by comments. Try to match the article per the standards mentioned in WP:INCITIES. Specifically, take care of the sections in the article. The sections on city's importance and science and technology may have to go (or merged to appropriate section). Add the city's location using one of the coordinate templates given in the WikiProject page. — Ambuj Saxena (talk) 12:34, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
  • I am editing/fixing the article. The section Science and Technology can be either merged with Education or can be removed. I will discuss about that in the talk page. The section city's important can be retained. I am providing enough inline references there. -- Rajith Mohan (Talk to me...) :-) 16:17, 19 September 2006 (UTC)
  • City's location is already added in the article. -- Rajith Mohan (Talk to me...) :-) 16:27, 19 September 2006 (UTC)


  • Comment There is no reference to the sentences related to Vizhinjam. References are needed there. The section city's important can be retained, hence it reflects the the future developments as well. --Samaleks 07:32, 20 September 2006 (UTC)


The section Science and Technology is merged with the Education section. -- Rajith Mohan (Talk to me...) :-) 13:02, 26 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Gulzar

The article does not contain much information about Gulzar as a writor or director, his writing style, his direction method, or any definitive comparison of his writing with other writers, (e.g. compare him with Galib, or even Javed Akhtar or Anand Bakshi). If filmography is removed, the article may even classify as a stub. Chirag 21:55, 26 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Citations

It does not have any footnotes nor a photograph of Gulzar sumal 06:58, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

  • It is quite clear that this article is still a stub. Chirag, I am not sure if you know how to proceed about the article, why don't you do it first, and come back when you run out of ideas. I hope you understand that this process is about getting ideas for articles, as against getting people work on it. If you want the latter, try Notice board for India-related topics/INCOTW. I am sure there would be many people interested in improving this article. — Ambuj Saxena (talk) 17:12, 15 August 2006 (UTC)
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