Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Kellie Pickler

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[edit] Kellie Pickler

Hi, I've kind of been working on this article a bit. Does this page have enough citations and references, as needed, or does it need more? I attempted to fix the image rationales and licensing, is it OK? Also how would you assess this article? Thank you. Pink moon 1287 21:37, 30 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Dinosaur puppy

  • Can some of the Post Idol sections be expanded on.
  • Does the discography section need to be fixed? I'm not sure if that picture is allowed to be on her page under fair use.
  • Are there any sources which are offline? Books, magazines or anything else that is a reliable source. T REXspeak 01:44, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Yannismarou

Wow! Beautiful girl! She should have won only for this reason! Now, seriously. I assess this article as a start article. It needs more information and further improvements. These are some suggestions:

  • "Notes" go before "External links".
  • Some sub-sections, like "American Idol" are under-citated. The rule is at least one inline citation for each paragraph. More sources would be welcomed. Printed sources are highly esteemed. Can you include any?
  • By the way italics in the headings are not recommended I think.
  • I'm not sure the "List of Kellie Pickler's performances on American Idol" is absolutely necessary. The fact it is hidden is a positive, but again I'm not sure about its necessity. After all in GACs and FACs long lists are not esteemed. You can turn this list into prose under the title "Kellie Pickler's performances on American Idol" or even create a sub-article under the title "Kellie Pickler's on American Idol", making a summary of this sub-article in the main current article "Kellie Pickler". These are just some ideas.
  • The lead needs expansion to summarize the article. Check WP:LEAD.
  • Inine citations go always after the punctuation and not before. You have to fix some of them.
  • "National" needs a prose polishing. Listy section with one-sentence paragraphs. Make the prose more coherent. Merge paragraphs etc. I also agree that it would be nice to expand the "Post-Idol" section if necessary.
  • I think the picture of the album is Ok, since it illustrates only the album and it is used only for informative reasons.
  • "Small Town Girl" sub-section is stubby. You can either expand it including more information or incorporate it in another (sub-)section.--Yannismarou 11:40, 2 October 2006 (UTC)
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