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[edit] Trams in Australasia

Article has been totally rewritten and wondering what could be done to improve it further. L blue l

A little expansion on the WA system. Good use of image, non photo (map?) would be bonus. Alter POV comments by someone called Fred 17:15, 11 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Peripitus

A Few Suggestions.

  • Lack of references is a problem - Prehaps use the references from the related article's appropriate sections.
  • Section on Adelaide trams (I'm being parochial) is very short. From what I can find out the tram network was huge before being neglected and dismantled.
  • There's nothing in the Pert/Adelaide/Sydney etc... sections on WHY the tram use was discontinued.
  • There's also nothing in the Melbourne section as to why they kept the trams and expanded the network at the same time as all of the other networks were being torn up.
  • Needs a section on the types of trams with particular reference (I think) to the manufacture of trams in Australia (Holden in Adelaide but also coachbuilders in Victoria etc..)
  • Probably needs a section on Tram Museums in Australia

Peripitus (Talk) 08:33, 21 January 2007 (UTC)