Wikipedia:WikiProject Australia/Peer review/Mount Henry Peninsula
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[edit] Mount Henry Peninsula
I believe this article is coming close to being worthy of a promotion, It may even be there, and I can not think of anything I can add that will make it better, it needs to be peer reviewed. Please note that the sections on the specific Fauna are small because there are already pages about those fauna. thankyou for your help, any tips would be appreciated, but please try to be specific. Yungur 12:56, 17 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Peripitus
A good interesting article - just a few comments
- lead is missing a definition of what a Bush Forever Site is
- no citations or wikilinks in the Geology section
- history, flora and fauna sections have large parts that are uncited
- The introduced species should be expanded to include cats, foxes, dogs and rabbits per section 3.4.2 of the 2002 management plan
- citation # 5 is malformed - not sure what format is sought here so I havn't edited it
- needs a copyedit - I found a couple of spelling mistakes and it's worth running this through a spellchecker.
- needs a section on human uses of the peninsula park (walking trails, toilets, benches etc...) and possibly their impact
- seems to be a spelling mistake in citation 6
- I can find a news article on this that may be appropriate to incorporate
- The Press; 25/07/1996, p30 - article on creating an open cut mine near the park
