Wikipedia:WikiProject Australia/Peer review/Jindyworobak Movement
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[edit] Jindyworobak Movement
one user, who has done quite a bit of usefull work on the article, seem to wants to turn the article into a soap-box for his dubious opinions on ethnicity. i pulled him up on one or 2 points (he's scottish, & appears to have no background knowledge of aust. history or lit.) & this has since degenerated. he's started going on about my racism etc. cld be usefull if someone else commented. thnx ⇒ bsnowball 16:43, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Peripitus
A few issues - some of which need to be addressed before any imbalance in the article can be looked at
- References - there are none that I can see from a reliable source. Needs references, for this subject preferably inline per WP:CITE
- Once this is addressed then other can start helping but, without references, it does read as an essay.
- The lead is too short and needs to summarise the article per WP:LEAD
- Some headings are not ideal... I've fixed this as I saw fit.
- There are weasel words in the article - see WP:AWT for details on this.
- 1930s and 1950s in the lead should usually not be wikilinked. Only wikilink specific dates so that date format preferences work.
