Talk:West Liberty Foods
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[edit] Good Article nomination has failed
The Good article nomination for West Liberty Foods has failed:
- POV in sentences like Even by meat industry standards, the Mount Pleasant plant goes to unusual lengths to ensure food safety, and a generally unencyclopaedic, brochure-like tone mar the article. The list of awards adds to this impression and does not add anytning of encyclopaedic value. Nor is a list of the management required.
- The lead section should be expanded to summarise more of the article's content.
- Section headings should be capitalised according to the WP:MOS. Worldtraveller 17:56, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Further Suggestions
Worldtraveller offered some more suggestions on his talk page here. I have tried to address all of his suggestions as much as possible.--Dekkanar 00:56, 14 July 2006 (UTC)