Wikipedia:Version 1.0 Editorial Team/MCB articles by quality/5

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Skippyonline 10:10, 6 March 2007 (UTC) (edit comment)

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Wim van Dorst (Talk) 22:07, 2 March 2007 (UTC) (edit comment)

The 2-OH on beta-D-fructose should be pointing away from the page. The stereochemistry of the existing image shows alpha-D-fructose. Please fix. (edit comment)