• Add appropriate section headings per WP:MOS
• The article needs inline citations

Hemmingsen 09:06, 28 January 2007 (UTC) (edit comment)

and before Jokmok group era he used to be a member in the comedian group of Thep Pho-ngam (Aka. Pa-Thep) too. (edit comment)

Article is being graded as Start class for both the WP Australia and Biography projects as it has been significantly re-written to provide a greater history of the subject in a manner structured with the expectations of both projects. An image of the subject has also been uploaded under fair use criteria and included with the article. thewinchester 12:42, 13 March 2007 (UTC) (edit comment)

[edit] Wikipedia:WikiProject Anglicanism/Assessment

Peter Elliott is notable within the Anglican church but not outside. The actual WP bio is pretty bare: not much more than a stub Wassupwestcoast 03:11, 28 January 2007 (UTC) (edit comment)

Corrections, cite templates, image, December 2006. -Susanlesch 01:58, 22 December 2006 (UTC)

General comments:

• Could use some work on the copy to make it more readable. At present it is quite technical, and lacks narrative, comprising merely a series of statments on variuos projects.
• Snake-like sentences such as: "As director of marketing and director of program development at Systems Concepts, he programmed the first Chinese-character digital communication system and designed the Systems Concepts Digital Synthesizer, for ten years the primary engine for the computer music group at Stanford University Center for Computer Research in Music and Acoustics (CCRMA)" should be broken down so readers don't get weary three quarters of the way through ;).
• Too many blue links compared to size of text, expanding on the different projects will help readability.
• Is there a free image of Samson available that could be used.

I realise this article is at an early stage, and probably my comments will be redundant fairly soon. + [[User:and merge with "Peter R. Sampson" [sic] |Ceoil]] 21:07, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

• Thank you so much for your comments, Ceoil. Sorry I ran out of time, no time to write. Better photo in place, sections have been started. Another user kindly merged in "Peter R. Sampson" [sic] and added subway racing. I am re-rating this "Start" class (hope that's right). Best wishes. -Susanlesch 02:47, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

• Forgot to mention infobox has been added. -Susanlesch 03:00, 4 January 2007 (UTC) (edit comment)

I rated this article as "start" class because it contains a fair amount of information, but it is largely unorganized and not complete. (edit comment)

Which is true?

Death Row Page On Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Death_Row_Records Petey Pablo's page on Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Petey_Pablo (edit comment)

Photo, citations & editing exceed standards. (edit comment)

No images, no section on influences, biography is too short, not enough sources used yet... Fram 16:14, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] High importance

As creator of the Smurfs, one of the most succeesful and internationally known comics series (through the comics, cartoons, and merchandising), he is of high importance to a comprehensive coverage of comics. Fram 16:14, 7 November 2006 (UTC) (edit comment)