Talk:Valis: The Fantasm Soldier

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[edit] Copyediting Cleanup

I removed non-NPOV text from the introduction:

Because of the first two ports limitations, it had a lousy gameplay. The Famicom version had better controls, but an equally poor level design.

and from the Game Design section:

Valis' jerky animation, bad hit detection, awkward scrolling and each boss fight suffered from slowdown. Also, the level designs were simple, and the main character moved quite slowly.

If anyone can source these comments appropriately, feel free to do so, and add them back in with improved grammar. I also removed the caption text regarding Japanese publisher Riot's logo appearing on the building in the background from the screenshot; I don't think it's needed.Landauer 16:02, 12 July 2006 (UTC)