Talk:Toshi (musician)

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I think the tone could be more encyclopedic. Currently we have sentences like "He seems to be very happy, his solo album Aoi hoshi no tabibito (produced with Norihiro Tsuru) sounds beautiful and full of harmony and love." A-giau 15:21, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. That's a bit too POV to be encyclopedic. --82.36.172.64 19:10, 14 November 2006 (UTC)