User:TimidGuy/sandbox

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[edit] Statement of purpose

The purpose of this page is to help the editors of the Wikipedia article on Transcendental Meditation systematically improve the article.

[edit] A prioritized list of areas needing attention

Note that the items listed here do not constitute criticisms -- just points of discussion. Please don't debate on this page, but do feel free to rearrange priorities. I suppose we can consider using the Talk page to discuss the priorities.

[edit] Outstanding issues

  • Undue weight
  • Problematic OR and need for balance in religion section
  • External links
  • Improper citations (such as no page number, no publisher or author given, etc.
  • Inadequate sources

[edit] Areas needing attention

  • Criticisms with only one point of view given
  • Quotes from newspapers taken out of context
  • Opinions of Maharishi not supported
  • Newspapers cited that may not qualify as secondary sources
  • POV sites used as sources
  • Check to see whether all TM studies mentioned were peer-reviewed (mainly an issue in the "Range" section)
  • OR in cult section