Talk:Thought Adjuster

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[edit] NPOV

This article quickly has been noted as not being up to snuff with NPOV and even was flagged for deletion. I've made edits today to address the concerns. My expansion of the article last week is what seemed to trigger the attention that led to the concerns and the flag. (I should note though that the last half of the article wasn't my wording, but imported from The Urantia Book and cut from there as overflow on the topic. I didn't intend with my expansion to have it be considered anything but rough initial shaping up of this article, warts and all.) I'd like to hear from editors more about the POV to see what other improvements can be made. The article is only at a beginning stage of development and I appreciate assistance in making it better as more content is added. Wazronk 20:18, 4 March 2006 (UTC)

Wazronk, I agree that it can be improved for NPOV, but for now it will suffice until it is fully developed. I also believe it will become a useful article for Wikipedia. I will help as I can - am working on TUB article as well as "Epochal Revelations" - will take time to develop off line. Congratulations on keeping the article! Your edits did the job. Good work -it is more accurate now with less clean up to do ~ and thanks! Hanely 01:23, 7 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Articles for Deletion debate

This article survived an Articles for Deletion debate. The discussion can be found here. -Splash^talk 22:47, 6 March 2006 (UTC)