Talk:Third Day
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[edit] style
The first person is inapropriate for an encylopedia article and some of the explanation are unclear. I will attempt to correct this. 24.137.78.34 01:21, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
- Before you work too hard, it may make sense to revert back to the May 5 version of the page...At that point it was in pretty good shape. -Rholton 01:31, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
- Dang, I didn't check that. Oh well it's mostly done now. Except for that bit about Gomers. I don't really think the whole long story is aproptiate, it sounds a bit like a sermon, not an article, but I'd like some one else's opinion who knows more about the band to see if they can improve it more consrructively. The best I could do has been done. 24.137.78.34 15:25, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
I don't know the band well, but I can tell that the Gomers section needs a major overhaul to begin to meet wikipedia standards. Someone should tag this page... I don't know how.
I think this page should be reverted to the May 5 version, bat that's going pretty far back, so I thought I should ask if anyone has (reasonable) problems with that? --TorriTorri 05:16, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
- I'm a fan of the band, but I think the current version lacks NPOV. Reads like a word-by-word promotional excerpt from their webpage. Thief12 14:06, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Proposed Deletion
I received a message saying that this article was proposed for deletion, yet I don't see the reasons for this. The article was subject to several edits ending up in a POV version that seemed lifted from their webpage (as stated in the above comments) but I think I did a decent cleanup of it. Any words about this? Thief12 18:01, 6 August 2006 (UTC)