Talk:The Frost King

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

You have new messages (last change).

[edit] Some things to fix

Some things to fix (for starters):

  • The first subsection is titled Official version, but it is not clear what makes this official; I think this needs to be renamed.
  • The first paragraph of this section says that "the following is the explanation provided by Keller and Anne Sullivan to the public...". It is not clear what paragraphs constitute "the following": the next paragraph? the rest of the section? This needs to be made clear.

Doctormatt 23:01, 4 March 2007 (UTC)

Okay, I changed these things. Doctormatt 20:12, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
Retrieved from "http://en.wikipedia.org../../../t/h/e/Talk%7EThe_Frost_King_9f1f.html"