Talk:The Disclosure Project

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Archive 1 - ended December 31, 2006

[edit] Criticisms Section

Made some grammatical and vocabulary changes to make the paragraph flow more smoothly. For example, "critical criticism" while not inaccurate is awkward, and is somewhat redundant. "At present" is better language than "right now" for an encyclopedia. Also the project makes "claims" supported by "evidence" (rather than "presenting evidence" supported by "evidence" etc... JimZDP 03:44, 4 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Title part of name

I propose that the title of the people in the witnesses list be transferred to the occupation cell for visual clarity. __meco 06:48, 31 March 2007 (UTC)